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A Wish for Dreamless Slumber by ~GreenTea13:iconGreenTea13:

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A Wish for Dreamless Slumber

A cool hand
falls silently
over her jutted hip.
Unaware, yet determined,
fingers trace smooth,
bronzed skin
and arms wrap around
a slender frame.

Dreams are vividly
flashing in color
and glitter
and sparks.
Throwing champagen.
Smearing lip stick
and blowing out moonlit lanterns.

Dreams awaken
these hide-behind feelings.
They set my body a blaze,
move me,
and use me for their own
sick-sweet desires.
Dreams haunt me.
Dreams keep me from speaking,
from laughing,
from loving.

Dreams keep me from praying.

This is a wish for dreamless slumber.
For rest.
For the rebirth of hope.
This is a wish for dreamless slumber.
For counting sheep
and lullabies eternal.
©2006-2009 ~GreenTea13
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-.- 5 in the morning. bleg.
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~LipWriting:iconLipWriting: Jul 2, 2006, 8:00:15 AM
Wow. That's really ...I don't know the word.

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"If you can't laugh at yourself, life's gonna seem a whole lot longer than you like. " - Garden State
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roses are red
violets are blue
Some poems rhyme
this one doesn't?
~GreenTea13:iconGreenTea13: Jul 2, 2006, 8:06:02 AM
-.-

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Forget the gun, grab the cannoli.
~LipWriting:iconLipWriting: Jul 2, 2006, 12:13:23 PM
^.^

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"If you can't laugh at yourself, life's gonna seem a whole lot longer than you like. " - Garden State
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roses are red
violets are blue
Some poems rhyme
this one doesn't?
~madhatterzwei:iconmadhatterzwei: Jul 2, 2006, 5:57:03 PM
"Dreams awaken these hide-behind feelings." Hot damn! You just get better and better everyday! You might leave me behind.

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It grieves me that this is not a dirigible,
that the sea stows us as a song in the belly of a maestro...
Oliver de la Paz
~GreenTea13:iconGreenTea13: Jul 2, 2006, 6:03:34 PM
Haha! Or not! You're poetry will always outshine mine, but thank you nonetheless. Something like that means a lot to me coming from my senpai!! <3

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Forget the gun, grab the cannoli.
~maskedpianist:iconmaskedpianist: Jul 2, 2006, 7:57:44 PM
Wow. Just wow. That is so depressing, so sad, sad, sad.

I must admit- I haven't a clue what 'champagen' means... Sorry.

I'm at Alanna's, and she says for me to "JUST READ THE STUPID POEM!"

I hardly consider it 'stupid.' Splendid, love, just splendid.

Luvlieressessessess youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

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If you weren't real, I would make you up.
-Joseph Arthur
~GreenTea13:iconGreenTea13: Jul 2, 2006, 8:51:23 PM
Aw, I'm glad you like it. I'm really depressed. Well... not like depressed-depressed. More like, I wish I had my friends with me right now because I'm about to kill myself from boredom.

I LOVERSZEIS YOU TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah. Alanna's degrading sometimes. -.-

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Forget the gun, grab the cannoli.
~split-screen-sadness:iconsplit-screen-sadness: Jul 3, 2006, 9:38:02 AM
I am amazed...I love you.

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:heart:alicejane

I'm the kind of human wreckage that you love.
-mcr, blood
~madhatterzwei:iconmadhatterzwei: Jul 5, 2006, 3:49:58 PM
Awww, sweetie---wait! YOUR SENPAI!?! ((I sound like Sanzo! xD ))

o-0

When did this happen?

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It grieves me that this is not a dirigible,
that the sea stows us as a song in the belly of a maestro...
Oliver de la Paz
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